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It was about, talked about military stuff.

a little cheesy, but good

Wow! What a TINY book.

Over-the-top and obsessive, nearly paranoid...
The Empire's Old Clothes
Reading Lone Ranger.
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Worst sequal ever!
Good and bad; the bad does it inThe storytelling is very patchy. The beginning gives a great set-up: the creation of Gog, the birth of Superman and Wonder Woman's child, the deaths of multiple Supermen, the appearance of the Linear Men, and the reappearance of many supporting characters from Kingdom Come. The middle of the book, however, breaks the flow by setting aside this storyline and focusing waaaaaaay too much on a select few supporting characters, even one who wasn't IN Kingdom Come. By the end of the book, when the original storyline resumes, you'll be hard-put to still be interested in what's happening, and the horrible art in the last chapter was an insult to Jerry Ordway's and Ariel Olivetti's beautiful work in the beginning.
Mark Waid should go to hell for this.

One-sided view

Driven to Win: think twiceOn the good side, there are some decent pictures in there, but nothing spectacular.


Sorry but one to missI have read a bunch of books on writing recently and this work is a good example of what not to do.
I think I got to about page 30 before it was just too painful and I had to put it down.
Characters are introduced one after another in the first few short chapters. I wasn't sure who I was supposed to be rooting for. The villian appears in short order, but it takes a few pages to realize that he is the antagonist of the book.
We over hear his side of a phone conversation with his wife. The monologue is horrible. There is constant "telling" and very little "showing". The characters hardly do anything, it is mostly the authors explaining what is going on and why.
The point of view is bad, in fact, I don't think there is any point of view (other than all knowing narrator) and we track so many characters we don't know who to root for or who to feel sympathy for.
At least by reading the first little bit of this book I got a good lesson on what to avoid and real world examples of poor writing. In that is the only value I found here.


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